All Comments on '750-0 Mystery Woman'

Fun and games in the park!

5

You’re a bad boy duleigh! Strange how a certain name keeps popping up in these stories. 5⭐️. Em

The romance of the picnic basket quickly followed by the eroticism, the open lust, the raw sexuality... and the anticlimax at the end bringing everybody back to earth with a twinkle in their eyes. It felt good.

Thought he might have already been naked when he came up to her from behind. That would have been a pretty bold introduction!

Your getting very good at description in few short words to set a character mood and their whereabouts. Good job

Well painted imagery of a fantasy erotic encounter.

Mystery. Sounds like Jason and Emily have something going. I was excited to see where this was going and it went where I wanted it to go. A very different style than your usual one, but with tension and eroticism. I liked it.