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Peter_ClevelandPeter_Clevelandover 2 years ago

Nonstop sensuality here. It's lots of fun to read. It's nice to see the sexuality and sensuality of 40-year-old women appreciated, too. And I thought Amber & Nikki's physical attraction to each other was nicely depicted.

One slightly odd note: Not a single thought of her marriage, husband, & children seems to have popped into Amber's head while she & Eugene were enjoying each other. Maybe the occasional second-thought and/or twinge of guilt would have made her adventure seem (even) more realistic, hence even more erotic?

Any chance of a Chapter 02?

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