by YDB95
But the story is too short for the idea. Your writing is so good I expect better! I really liked Patricia and Mellissa as characters. And the Evil Landowners were well done. But for Mellissa to jump ship so abruptly and embrace a very public demonstration of her new-found orientation seems almost as unlikely as one of the Evil Doers over-night conversion.
I liked the story seemed like it could happen almos too far fetched but yeah it could happen.
I was correct and thankful about your stories. I know I will enjoy reading the rest.
Gave it a 5*. The greedy a--holes, including her bastard boss, got what was coming to them.