All Comments on 'A Backwoods Awakening'

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BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Nice

That was a nice story .

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdabout 11 years ago
Good idea

But the story is too short for the idea. Your writing is so good I expect better! I really liked Patricia and Mellissa as characters. And the Evil Landowners were well done. But for Mellissa to jump ship so abruptly and embrace a very public demonstration of her new-found orientation seems almost as unlikely as one of the Evil Doers over-night conversion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

brilliant more please id love to see them stay together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Casey 1988

I liked the story seemed like it could happen almos too far fetched but yeah it could happen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Super 2

I was correct and thankful about your stories. I know I will enjoy reading the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good story

Gave it a 5*. The greedy a--holes, including her bastard boss, got what was coming to them.

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