by YDB95
Gave it a 5*. The greedy a--holes, including her bastard boss, got what was coming to them.
I was correct and thankful about your stories. I know I will enjoy reading the rest.
I liked the story seemed like it could happen almos too far fetched but yeah it could happen.
But the story is too short for the idea. Your writing is so good I expect better! I really liked Patricia and Mellissa as characters. And the Evil Landowners were well done. But for Mellissa to jump ship so abruptly and embrace a very public demonstration of her new-found orientation seems almost as unlikely as one of the Evil Doers over-night conversion.