All Comments on 'A Backwoods Awakening'

by YDB95

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good story

Gave it a 5*. The greedy a--holes, including her bastard boss, got what was coming to them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Super 2

I was correct and thankful about your stories. I know I will enjoy reading the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Casey 1988

I liked the story seemed like it could happen almos too far fetched but yeah it could happen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

brilliant more please id love to see them stay together

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdabout 11 years ago
Good idea

But the story is too short for the idea. Your writing is so good I expect better! I really liked Patricia and Mellissa as characters. And the Evil Landowners were well done. But for Mellissa to jump ship so abruptly and embrace a very public demonstration of her new-found orientation seems almost as unlikely as one of the Evil Doers over-night conversion.

BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Nice

That was a nice story .

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