All Comments on 'A Bad Day Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Can't wait for the second Chapter

Nicely written, lovely set-up, love-hate, slowly falling in love with a man who controls her compltely and lights a fire within her she can't control.

As I said, can't wait for the second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So far...

Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Andi/Kelly?

Why does her name change back and forth? Edit, PLEASE!

Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
Excellent.

Sophisticated Writing. Anticipating where this will go.

Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
Warning: Abandoned Story.

A shame.

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