All Comments on 'A Beach from a Dream'

Subtle, bit of guilt, lust spilling out everywhere, real people with three dimensional reactions. I loved it

At some moment in the story I had a kind of a flash vision; I was sitting there, close to the fire, a glass in my hand, among them.

You wrote it down almost perfectly, one could have the hint of an idea, the girls had something in mind, almost from the start, And it all developed naturally, like I tried to let it happen in my former relationships. Though I did not succed very often, I must confess.

Anyway, an excellent story, that came to a stop at the right time. Had you written more, you certanly would have immaculated the story in my opinion.

Thank you !!!

Please don't take my bad English too serious. It's not my native language.