by HighLumin
I would like to suggest that you put a reader advisory in the beginning of your story. For me personally, it was violent more violent then I care to read. Not my cup of tea. Some people like that kind of story, I dont. I found it very disturbing and upsetting and would never have read it had I known what it was about.
I was expecting the anal to come before the lesbianism, but overall i really enjoyed this. Havent looked to see if there is a sequel, but i hopethere is. If not, i would love to read one.