All Comments on 'A Beauteous Flower Ch. 14'

This is certainly a surprise! Madison is actually much more than a 2 dimensional airhead. Maybe you should have let us know earlier. Her continual boss bitch antics would have been less tiresome if relieved by more insight into her hidden self. This is a very well done piece of writing, the best so far in this tale, and deserves a max out score of 5 stars.

The retelling of her past (her story) was supposed to be a letter to Daniel. Unless the letter is yet to come, this rambling narrative is informative but misses the mark. 4.3*