All Comments on 'A Beautiful Thing Ch. 04'

Why didnt you put angie and cindy alone and see if they have some girl girl that would be great

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

For one I despise group sex, and sharing. It just doesn't seem right, especially when people are in "love"

them> You are a dim witted retard ass w/o a name

You should have made a 3-some with Cal, Angie and Cindy, with Angie and Cindy getting pregged with Cal's babies so that in 9 months their pussies would have been stretched by half-niggah rug rats passing through to the outside world to suck on tits that delivered Chocolate milk and shit and peed Chocolate juice.

just happend to find your story and i loved it. makes me wanna try one. definetly hot!!!!! thanks you are going on my favorite list. cant wait to read more from you.

Get some one to edit because you seriously detracted from what could have been a great story.

so disappointing.......started out quite well then decided to commit suicide.....this was quite terrible

What happened to Mark and Shauna?

Did their relationship last or did it end when one of them found someone new to help them find the corporate ladder