All Comments on 'A Beauty - and a Beast'

by Teenage Venus

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doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Great twist at the end!!

You have a fantastic use of vocabulary. I would have loved to see more dialogue between the pair, but you covered that well with his inner thoughts and emotions.

Great job hon!! ;-)

MunachiMunachiabout 19 years ago
nice

I quite liked it your choice of words, and also the story and especially the end of it. Must say though I did lose interest for a bit towards the beginning of the second page, but still, very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You story is beautiful

written in a very erotic and seductive manner. I hate the word stygian but besides that, very well done. The knowledge of events and time period were astounding.

DstepDstepabout 14 years ago

A very entertaining and intelligent story. a great read.

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