All Comments on 'A Bets a Bet'

Holy shit.

That was amazing.

Bravo. Seriously. Bravo. There are some typos and whatnot, but the characterization, the story, the romance, the incendiary sex scenes -- all of it was beyond incredible.

That was fucking *awesome.*

I promise, i really try to make sure all the spelling is correct. I really really try. I reread, i google words to make sure I'm using the right spelling. Sometimes if it can be misinterpreted, like "say your piece" vs "say your peace". I'll just cut it and put in a new sentence that gives the same feel but can't be mixed up. I use spell check, but i found out it doesn't work all the time. So i reread and reread over and over till i think i have it. But rereading the story 100 times over weeks or months, I'll still put "their" instead of "there" and miss it lol

Amazing and hot story! The "slowish" buildup was definitely worth it. Thank you!

Hall of Fame!

In you go!

generally i prefer futa on female or male on female but holy shit, this was so good that i could look past my preferences

seriously, this is some good writing

10/10. Loved the characters. They feel real.

Also i think that one line about her spitting in his mouth made me realize i have a spit fetish.

That was definitely one of the best stories I have read on here in the last 6 months 5 stars

What can I say it's peak.

But for real this the sort of story that makes me want to start writing, good job I loved it.

This was the best one i've ever read in my entire life

Thanks author, for bestowing such wonderful blessing

Great story one of better ones I’ve seen in a bit keep it up your doing great 😊

I'm writing this comment before finishing this story. I'm only on page two as of writing this. I don't normally read stories longer than 2-4 pages long. But I saw this and said fuck it. I'm INVESTED! HOLY SHIT! If there's more stuff with this level of detail and emotion I will be sure to stay tuned lol

If you liked this one. I have one other that goes along the same feel, 'Sparrows need engineers: Yosha.' its technically 2nd in a series but you can just jump in and read it because it worked stand alone before people realized its a series. Not trying to plug my own work, just pointing out the one story i know you would enjoy if you enjoyed this one. But it is a more sci fi setting. Really appreciate you all reading!

I'm happy to see you are writing again. I love this story and all the emotions.

Simply amazing and so fucking adorable. Loved it. From begining to end.

Easy 5/5 + favorited.

Way to tug my heartstrings every which way, loved all of it. Very lovely in so many ways and I’m here for whatever else u got haha

Came for a girlcock, stayed for the wholesomeness. Fucking good.

This has to be, and quite easily, among the best stories of this genre I've read in quite some time.

The characters were likable, the sex was actually sweet, rough yes, but sweet.

So all I have to say is, well done! Great job!

Solid, sexy, and damned captivating. It's been a while since a longer read has kept me so entranced. You switch character perspective very smoothly, I must say

As others have said

Very much the best in this genre. There needs to be more of this.

Honestly, I almost bailed on this story and I'm glad I didn't. The spelling and grammar mistakes were a real distraction, but I decided to see where the story would lead. Having Rodes disappear after the sexual encounter was brilliant, and set the "hook" nicely. Well done.