All Comments on 'A Birthday Fantasy'

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vcwriter17bvcwriter17babout 1 year ago

I really don’t want to rate this. On the one hand, its a 5 for elegance. On the other, it needs more. Odds are there are more complex and conflicted thoughts in her head, and his as well. The story would be so much more fun if we knew them better,

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