All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise'

Interesting characters but leaves a lot of questions unanswered. Your stories are always erotic but I find the back story more interesting. I hope you explore that ini future episodes. I also hope you write a proper novel some day. Also in this story, I found the rapid move from disappointment to sex unrealistic.

Thank you for you comments and criticism Shami. Yes that part does seem unrealistic but I couldn't imagine them sitting down and having a calm conversation about the Sam/Dave relationship and then moving onto sex.

BTW, I HAVE written a novel and you may be interested because it is set in India and if I am not mistaken, your name seems to be Indian? The novel is called Jalendu, by Mark Andrew. You can get it on Smashwords or you will find it also on most online ebook sellers (or send me a PM and I will send you a copy).