All Comments on 'A Bit of a Belly Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Would have loved it if at the end, if Becca leaned over to Liz's complete surprise and kissed her on the lips and said" I love you and the way you look". Then felt Liz's belly and kissed her on the lips again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

If you plan to make another story using these themes, could you make it from 'Becca' POV instead?

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