by Woodchuckbdsm
Very nicely written, the authour did a good job of bringing the reader into the life of the central character.
Looking forward to more.
A great beginning. Very interested to see where the story goes. Hope there is more action in the next segment.
Not even the Library of Congress has a book that can equal Nate's!
A great start to an imaginative new series, and the coming chapters are outstanding as well.
Great imagination. The story is a foundation of great things to come providing he follows all the instructions the book is giving.
Look forward to many more episodes.
This is an interesting start, although the 'book' has some interesting properities, some history would be nice.
A prominsing beginning, and I'm hoping that future chapters maintain the early momentum.
Destiny not a book can make someone do whatever you want them to do
I haven't found an author in the mind control catagory, that was this good for a very long time.
Original work...trailer park, relatives porking same girl...and...it was hot...nasty...made me wet all over again!
Great start. I love the idea of the book and how it has it's own agenda for shaping his behavior. Looking forward to Ch. 2.
Kind of like "The Book" by Blackie, but with an original approach. Looking forward to Much more. Thanks.
looking forward to reading more Sir... many would wish a book such as that.
HOW it would be used is the key.
As fate would have it You have no need of it Yourself .. simply speak the words as You lead me onward in this journey W/we've begun.