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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Suspense

The story has great suspense. Write the next part soon!

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
A good start

Very nicely written, the authour did a good job of bringing the reader into the life of the central character.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good read

read the whole thing and would like to see more

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Enjoyed this

Looking forward to what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A great start!

A great beginning. Very interested to see where the story goes. Hope there is more action in the next segment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Magically Delicious!

Not even the Library of Congress has a book that can equal Nate's!

A great start to an imaginative new series, and the coming chapters are outstanding as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Intriguing

Great imagination. The story is a foundation of great things to come providing he follows all the instructions the book is giving.

Look forward to many more episodes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Intruguing

This is an interesting start, although the 'book' has some interesting properities, some history would be nice.

A prominsing beginning, and I'm hoping that future chapters maintain the early momentum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thought

Destiny not a book can make someone do whatever you want them to do

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I haven't found an author in the mind control catagory, that was this good for a very long time.

Nikita_writerNikita_writerover 18 years ago
Trailer Park Triad

Original work...trailer park, relatives porking same girl...and...it was hot...nasty...made me wet all over again!

RedJohnnyRedJohnnyover 18 years ago
Looking forward to Ch. 2

Great start. I love the idea of the book and how it has it's own agenda for shaping his behavior. Looking forward to Ch. 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Really Good

Kind of like "The Book" by Blackie, but with an original approach. Looking forward to Much more. Thanks.

caged angelcaged angelabout 18 years ago
mmmm what happens next Sir?.. *smiles*

looking forward to reading more Sir... many would wish a book such as that.

HOW it would be used is the key.

As fate would have it You have no need of it Yourself .. simply speak the words as You lead me onward in this journey W/we've begun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bad

Boring

wicked62wicked62about 7 years ago

Great story. Well written. Can't wait for the rest..

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