by Sean Renaud
I very much liked this story. The old man's warning was just subtle enough to set me to wondering. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
IF it was a romance she would have loved tyler, but she became as selfish as the two dick heads. Tyler find someone worthy...
I though I knew how this story was going to go. I didn't. Thank you for showing even a Valentine's story can still surprise us. And thank you for the message, while I'm at it.
Wow romantic and sweet, so unlike you. You must be heading to a new phase of your life. I like this but don't lose too much of the old you.
a lovely story of awakening! made me realise one or two things about myself too thank you x
The romantic love this gal finds with a guy who truly adores her requires her to learn that a vain Adonis is not the answer, nor any other self-centered jerk. The magic chocolate is the secret, ain't it? A fun story!
I like a little witchcraft, and sex together, makes for a good story. Thanks
I did enjoy the story but there were a few spelling and grammar errors that distracted from the purpose.
I loved the fact that it wasn't just about the sex, that Lisa was looking for more then that. I also like the fact that you just hinted at the fact that she was a bigger girl, and didn't just say she was.
All shapes all sizes all types there is always someone out there who loves you for who you are!
kudos loved it!
Truly, it's a cute plot line (albeit a bit predictable), but as posted, the tale is in serious need of an editor.
Keep writing, but get some assistance before finalizing the story.
-- KK in Texas
I loved it. It was very creative. My only complaint is that instead of posting this to romance, it should have been posted to mind control.
Good job.