by MINKX
well thought out and brilliantly executed. - jane
Great - love the pace of it and the details, but need a little more... chapter 2, perhaps?
Loved it!! Hope you write again about these two. Great work, spelling, punctuation, etc. Hope to read more of your stuff.
mink, whew, is all i have to say. It is nice to be a brat some times. -teds
I really liked it but it could a been a little longer, write more in this catagorie