All Comments on 'A Brother & Sister Ch. 10'

good clean family fun.good story keep it up.

the high point of your story is the motel room bit with te ten women, since then it good, but. While that story was totally physically impossible, it was good pron and was erotic. Your story line cound use another such senario

I hope you don´t late in write the next chapter.

I would like to knows what happend when each family returning a their home.

greetings.

Just another excellent addition to this well-written series. Loved it! Hope to read more.

Awesome stuff!

I have read the entire series and hope it does not end.

I THINK THAT U SHOULD CHNAGE YOUR NAME TO NASTY NIKKI, BECAUSE GIRL U HAVE A VERY NASTY IMIGANATION OR ONE HELL OF A LIFE WITH YOUR FAMILY. I THINK I'VE READ ALL OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS AND THIS IS WITHOUT A DOUBT THE BEST TO DATE.

KEEP IT OR OTHERS COMING

please keep em coming! (pun intended) your stories make me hot. dont stop now! they just keep getting better!

I have read all the stories and loved them all. Please keep them cumming. It would be more fun to see more family members get involved until everyone had a chance at the voluptuous Julie and that monster cock of Steves'. Besides, Olivia hasn't had her triple yet and I know she wants it bad.

Nikki, It is hard to believe that anyone so young as you can have so much talent. This is an award winning story. Do you plan to publish a book? It would become a classic, even among writers with your ilk. I have read some good writers, but you are among the very best. Thank you so much. A male friend

Great hot story. By the third paragraph i had a hardon that I played with clear to the end. more more more

How can you top THAT! Though I really hope you try. So HOT!!

Stories about family-fucking are so much fun to read. You gave me a great erection which I played with as I read your fine story. Thank you for the fun. And the orgasm.

you better continue this story.

its great.

yeah like holy crap, this story kicked ass, it kept me entertained and satistfied for days, this shuld deffinitly be a movie

Please don't stop!!! I look forward to reading more and more of your stories! I had almost hoped that the guys would be persuaded to do each other by the girls. That would be like a true mindblower (or some kind of blower!!)

I hope the family keeps the fun going! WRITE ON!!!!

I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO HARD FOR SUCH A LONG PERIOD IN ALL LIFE READING A STORY LIKE THIS. YOU HAVE A GREAT IMAGINATION.

HOPE A SEQUEL IS ON THE WAY.

My pussy is sore from all the mastrabation while reading this. Keep up the work and bring this family back soon so I can read and cum some more.

WOW. I have read all 10 chapters of this story. What an imagation you have and are such a good writter. Have you ever considered going pro with your stories? I am looking foward to reading some of you others. Great work!

its my fave

i'm not really into incest but when i went to the most view section and read 1-6 i had to read more. to make a long story short after reading 9 i wanted the whole family to get together. and sure enough in 10 you delivered. it was amazing to see a family so close. the whole series was great and i hope there's more to cum.

u r just amazing at writing, i have never read such a good story in my life. keep up the great work, and btw thank u for not having any of the guys having sex with another guy. great story!!!!!!! u rock

Interesting family. What about having the girls use the strap on with the guys. A bi-male threesome with any of the ladies would pretty much cover it all. The story is great like written, look forward to future chapters.

Unbelievably hot. I'm hereby adding another vote for Steve and Jordan hooking up. X.

I could not stop reading once I started, I got a laugh at some some of statements that Adriana come out with at the start. keep it going please!!!!!!!!

Well written. You truly do have a gift!!!

Your story has been amazing and has had me going from chapter 1. Absolutely loved it and am looking forward to reading more of your works

This story is the most fucked up thing i have ever heard an aunt, uncle, cousin, daughter, son, mother, and daughter all having sex at the same time this family is seriously messed up the only part i liked is when steve and julie were fucking each other

1. To Nikki: A PERFECT ending to a PERFECT story! WOW! You are without a doubt tied with Wm Sexspear as the best erotic writer E-V-E-R!! 2. To "WOW": Let me see if I've got this straight: Uncles, aunts, mothers, fathers, and cousins together is "fucked up", but a brother and sister together is okay?!!! A. Maybe you should take some time to re-examine your feelings on incestuous sex before you pass judgement on others; and B. If family sex bothers you, why are you reading in the "Incest/Taboo" category?!!! Just admit that you're just as big a "freak" as everyone else who reads this category, and enjoy it. I think you'll be happier for it. From one "freak" to another, it bothered me for a little while too, but once I accepted my feelings, and discovered that there are A LOT of others who feel the same way, I found myself enjoying the stories more and more as time passed. I think that once you've discovered that not everyone thinks you're a "pervert" for feeling this way, you'll enjoy them more too.

this was so erotic...i had a hard on throughout and now I want to read the story again from the beginning...Its sooooo erotic...I will look for you Nikki ...always!

You wrote an amazing story I came upon this site and have been glued to your story with every spare moment for the last two days. Keep up the great writing

that has to be the best piece of writing that I have read on this site. I've been reading for the past two days nonstop only interrupted by sleep. I hope that you continue writing new stories. You're very talented.

This has got to be one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. It took me 3 days to finish it, but WOW! I love how you incorprated all the family members. That is such a turn on! Will keep an eye out for more of your stories!

Please write some more chapters of this wonderful story. I get so wet every time I read this I just wish it goes on for a bit longer.

THAT WAS SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY. I HAVE NOW READ IT ALL IN A LITTLE MORE THAN FIVE HOURS AND MANAGED TO COME ONLY 23 TIMES. EXTEND THE STORY PLEASE. I WOULD LIKE TO READ IT AGAIN AND TRY AND BREAK THIS PREVIOUS RECORD. YOU ARE NOW MY SECOND FAVOURITE AUTHOR RIGHT AFTER SCOURIES. KEEP UP THE BRILLIANT WORK DARLING. LUV YA. LOL!!!!

A fantastic story, gonna be cumming just thinking about it for a long time - amazing!!

Great stories, lost count of the number of times I came

very nice...

Someone who has fantasies as depraved as my own! And you write them so very well. I just finished this series and now must get on with the rest of your stories. Thanks.

You have a definte skill at writing. I read the entire story, which kept me wondering what was going to happen next. I know my mind is trying to keep up with everything that's happening during those torent sex scenes. Good luck, you need to use your talents, keep writing.

Wow! lol, In ur case, this isn't just a story.It's a work of art! I read the whole story, and couldn't get enough. You have a gift! :)

that is the best storie i ever read keep up the good work

We all owe Nikki a debt of gratitude for this erotic, depraved group/mass autoerotic experience. Nikki's saga has produced a flood of pussy juice and cum that no one could ever measure. I know I sure contributed my share!!

Thanks Nikki.

Just thought I'd add another vote to have the guys put on a show for the girls. After all, all the girls gave each other pleasure. Surely, as horny as all of us Nikki fans are, we should'nt get bent out of shape over the guys getting to please each other......Hmmm, sure makes some great snowballing with the guys and girls a possibility. Wow, that would be so hot....to have Dad and Son sixty nine, than share the bounty with Mom and Sis,,,the four of them swapping in a fourway sloppy lovefest.

Just a thought....LOL, a really depreved, erotic thought.

Just thought I'd add another vote to have the guys put on a show for the girls. After all, all the girls gave each other pleasure. Surely, as horny as all of us Nikki fans are, we should'nt get bent out of shape over the guys getting to please each other......Hmmm, sure makes some great snowballing with the guys and girls a possibility. Wow, that would be so hot....to have Dad and Son sixty nine, than share the bounty with Mom and Sis,,,the four of them swapping in a fourway sloppy lovefest.

Just a thought....LOL, a really depreved, erotic thought.

My God Nikki_2021 You have really written something very special. After each page I was shaking trying to click on the next one. Your plot was beautifully developed; the way you started simple and slowly added other players climaxing with the family gang bang. Can't wait to read more of your stories you are definitely one of my all favourite authors. Thank you for a real erotic orgasmic read.

awesome story !! greart writing and amazing detailing.keep them coming!! one more series would be welcome!

I have been reading storys on Literotica since 2007 and this has got to be the best one if not in the top 5.Great Job.hope to see more by you.

I resly enjoied this story. This is the second time I've read it and found it to be one of the best. it is written so well you can see it realy happening. Keep up the good work.

HAVE JUST FINISHED ALL TEN CHAPTERS, READING MOST OF THEM AT WORK.

IT HAS BEEN FUN READING A CHAPTER, GETTING STIFF AND WALKING INTO THE NEXT OFFICE TO STAND NEXT TO MY BLONDE FEMALE COLLEAGE WITH

IT VERY VISIBLE AT HEAD HEIGHT.

HAVE REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY KEEP IT UP.

I felt like I was there!

PLEEEEEASE write more!

Loved it thanks was awesome

I have thoroughly enjoyed the Brother & Sister saga. WOW! If only this could have happened in my life...but I continue to fantasize..isn't that healthy? I look forward to reading more of your stories as they have really enhanced my appetite and I am taking this out on my spouse...TYVM4 sharing and the anticipation of things to cum...Antic

read all the chapters at my desk in work made my cock so hard its a wonder the girls in the office didn't notice.

mind you would have been great if they did and worked off the pressure of my straining cock

Thank you - my cock was tenting my pants when I finished - glad I got relief with my woman!

I will finish the remainder of your stories - hopefully you will keep writing!

nice cum stain in my pants. at least I got it out before I came. Only thing I could have asked for was some bi guy stuff. you had everything else there!!! hot hot hot

Wish there had been guys sucking and fucking. But my pussy is so wet it really doesn't matter!

that has to be the hottest story that i have ever read

hv masterbated 5 times.... while reading dis...tht ws awesome....

Every story you write is like a work of art this was no exception thank you lovely nikki you are the bomb and I'm in love with your filthy sexy mind ;)

But the father should have fucked his son.

Just happened to find your story and now I will back up and start from the first chapter. I have stroked myself so much my shoulders are both hurting from the story and after I finish all the first chapters and this one again I will need to rest my arms before I read more. I will have my lady to join me in reading the story from the first though we might have to read them outloud so we can hear them. We may be one by one on the floor playing gobble on each other. Of course our tounges and jaws may be sore after we get through with all the chapters. I know that now there are people that arejust as perverted as me. Loved it and hope to find more of your work. Keep up the hardons coming and the pussies slicking up the poles of the family.

I always love your stories nikki because you always know what to write next. keep up the great work!

(p.s. i jack off to this story and others all the time!)

***** Simply excellent *****

Would you answer the question: where did you learn to wright such?

oh lovely dear essence of sex, this is great story!

BUT PLEASE NO GAYS!!!! (turn me off straight away) I enjoy your series from 1 all the way to 10, you got a very very very talented writing skills and DIRTY IMAGINATION!!!

I'm not gay but I love to watch women eat each other.My pussy gets so hot I do believe I would let a women eat me all day long.The reason beng a women knows where to lick you and all the hot spots to eat a pussy even tho I' m not gay I really have loved to read about this family.It makes my pussy so hot I don't know what to do with myself.But don't these people ever get their fell of pussy and dick I mean that's all they do.Don't you think they would get sore?

damn good story i finished halfway through but came back after a few more paragraphs keep up the awesome stories

OMG, this is is SOOOO naughty!!! but i have to admit that if i need to put my fingers down below and think of a story... this is it!!!

And I have read a lot. All packed in a not-too-long story. Everyone does everyone (except the men, thank you, author). My favorite, mother/son followed by brother/sister, father/daughter, mother/daughter and sister/sister. All the types of incest stories that I like. Packed into each page with a good time had by all. Keep up the good work.

Wow this really shoukd not be a story I read in my office but I could not wait now I need to cum this is great keep writing

This is the most mind-blowing description of an orgy (incestuous or otherwise) that I've ever read. Thanks so much, Nikki!

unbelievably hot n wild - what a great writer I can't stop reading! and what a hot family!

Great story about an incest family. I planned on giving it a 4, then Lexi joined in and I had to raise the score to a 5.

Loved the girls in action. Hoping the guys get to be a bottom for each other soon.

I was a little dissappointed at the one glairing omitition at the poolside fuck-fest, a certain eldest daughter, but when the following morning rolled around I understood why. Fucking brilliant.

Enjoyed your story I'm a voracious reader even working long hours I still read around a thousand pages a day.Volume in a story is what i like would have liked to see the boy nock all the girls up Hey it's a guy thing.

I loved it. I love Incest. I am an experienced incestor. Wonderful read. Just one complaint, you need a good proof reader to correct errors and typo's. Otherwise Fucking brilliant. Fleur

Best story I've read in ages !

So much indulgence in each and every member....amazing and erotic.

Love the women on woman sex. Great ...

The whole series was great. 5 stars for all chapters.

This story is now literally just a orgy of a fuck fest. Whatever little little bit of story it had left is now gone and the story is now one continuos fuck fest. I dont even know anymore. If i was fucking my sister it would be because im in love with her not cos im lusting after her. I would certainly not share her with anyone or fucm anyone else myself. This is so far out the realm of even slightly realistic i would probably have a better chance of flying into the sun completely naked and surviving then tbis acthally happening. I gave you stars purely for your time put it and effort. The story itself screams Bullshit at me.

I started out loving this story, when the entire family organized started it just all blended together and I just skimmed the last two pages... it was just TOO much.

Omg what an absolutely awesome family fuck fest, everyone totally drunk on cunt juice and sex crazed. I have six fuck buddys and their family’s to play with. This so absolutely red hot. More and more please and soon. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

getting boring.... same old same old. too many people

WOW what an amazing fuck fest I just totally loved it 🥰 keep up the amazing writing!!!!

Oh my god, this was awesome!

I read through this whole series and when I got to the family orgy where Jules cleaned both holes of her cousin with cum oozing out of both I lost it! Amazing writing! Loved it!

The writing is so good it's like being there. The kinkier the better for me.

Just read this again along with my live in fuck buddy’s , now we need to find some more hot cunts for a full blown orgasmic orgy. So absolutely debauched and depraved. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way possible, just want more and more. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.