by Bjsroxxs
Next time, maybe the more mature Aiden can have a bit of sexy man hair for that muscular man chest -- something for Luke to caress and trace and even taste!
Drooling story :-)
You should continue with Aiden's Thanksgiving or Christmas visit next chapter. More dirtytalk, more rough sex and submissive-dominant stuff... βοΈππβΊοΈ
Aiden was being truthful about helping out his buddies. During my time in the military I offered my services to several soldiers, giving quick blow jobs when we were able to find some privacy.
Great, great story. Everything I was hoping it would be when I started reading it. Only thing missing was a kiss between brothers after the fuck.
'Great story. It was well developed, erotic and hot. The terrible grammar, however, was a real downer. Please have someone who is literate edit what you write.
Really nice story and well written. The story really allows more chapters.