All Comments on 'A Chance Meeting Ch. 01'

I enjoyed this a lot. The build up and the early relationship was described with a wonderful tenderness, which made Margo's rejection of Courtney all the more heart-breaking. You described her wilderness years well, and that ending held out a promise of more to come. Five stars from me xxxxx

This is such a wonderful story.

The way your writing is, I felt Courtney's pain, and I felt her elations. It's truly well written and I'm looking forward to more.

Well Done!

The build-up is great, and the only criticism is the suspense in having to wait for the next chapter!

Like the premise/theme of this storyline and the development of characters. Get that you are providing background/backdrop for what follows so I guess not surprising that this piece reads like narrative in a personal journal — lack of dialogue and descriptions of any tense moments between characters lacked intensity/feeling. Looking forward to where you take this journey.

Congratulations, for your first story, hug and kiss! Very well written. Look forward to your next one!!!

Loved it but it does need a follow to see if they find true happiness

well done for your first time

Very detailed, well written, a very enjoyable read!

Looking forward to Ch 2

This story reads as a synopsis for many stories to follow. I'm curious.

story and characters very good

So enjoyed this story. Would have enjoyed a reverse spin also with Margo having gotten wet and Courtney looking hot and styled. Would also be fun if Margo was a struggling waitress. Good story and I just love the author.