All Comments on 'A Change for the Better Pt. 01'

Great story. Not only is it a hot premise, but it's well written, just like everything else you've posted here!

This was soooo well-written from the very beginning. Yes, it's just 4 pages but there was nothing that was going to make me put my iPad down until the end.

I saw that you said you wrote this some time ago, but I sincerely hope ch2 is in the works, and up soon. Thank you so much!!

Very well written, I couldn't stop reading it ever more eager for more .. I very much indetify with Kevin - Keira and envy him-her so much it hurts .. what a lovely idea that such a change could occur, best if voluntarily .. hugs and kisses .. please continue their story .. I think that would be a really interesting and engaging movie script ..

I loved it so much, please can we have more parts.

Would love to see where it leads, although as an author myself, already have an idea.

I just re-visited your stories and my enjoyment of them hasn't faded one iota... but you haven't been back and that makes me a bit sad. I hope you see this and decide to offer up some more tasty treats for us soon. Thank you so much!