by Saved Soul
some sicko will read this and think it is ok to kidnap a woman cause with a little stimulation the woman will forget she was kidnapped...abd like sex with strangers
Because obviously it was real enough to him/her to be a sexual problem. A well written story. Write more!
I really like the description in this story, but I think there are too many paragraphs. A certain number help to build up towards the climax of the story (ooer...!) but too many start to chop it up like it was bullet-pointed. There were a few too many "..."s too - they start to lose their effect after the first few times.
Having said that, it's a nicely written story, and a lot better than a lot of the ones I've read on here!
oh thank you so much for this story.. i love it.. and always fantay about it.. it is unwilling.. yet safe and sexy... and being pampered with sex from a rich man in a nice place oh la la.. u made me so wet
love it
thai fan
Good story, but the crazed use of ellipses was a little distracting for me. Please, people, don't write in italics, all-caps or have every other word separated by.......