by SamanthaMeyers
I have yet to read a story that includes a woman’s breast size in her physical description that turned out to be worth my time. Unfortunately, this was no different as the entire story was so far from reality that I simply couldn’t enjoy any aspect of it.
Great, erotic story, and I hope by chance another miracle occurs and they find each other again
It's a nice story, definitely not bad
However, you can definitely 100% tell that a guy wrote it. Just the general tone was very masculine and made a lesbian like myself smile a little.
Thought the ending was a bit of a downer. Even though you tried to end it upbeat. Maybe Amber could waited around the store to see if her lover would show up. Either way I think the ending needed a little work.
I read this when I was still Anonymous and gave it 5*. Coming back so much later, it is still an excellent story but I still wish for a part two.