All Comments on 'A Cinderella Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice twist on a classic

This is not what I was expecting and I find the way you went with the story was a really smart and emotional direction. I expected the usual dead father and the evil step sisters and you were really tricky since when they found Sam in the shower and then when Sam got to the table and Louise had tears in her eyes, I thought you were gonna drop the bomb about the father being killed but I much prefer your take on it. Well done story and a very enjoyable tale. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice

This is a very good twist. I like the characters and the story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The introduction of Amber at the end destroyed this

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...