All Comments on 'A Claiming'

This story has too much pain, too much terror, too much one sided action. True Dom/sub relationships need to have a transfer of power, This one just has rape.

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For a non-consensual story, this is pure gold.

I have to disagree with jusdafax. It was meant to be a fantasy that they were both acting out. I thought it was beautifully written.

The writing is incredible, and it left me dripping wet. Well done.

I had to make this story a favorite! This was beautifully written, save for some errors. I actually felt the terror and loved it! Looking forward to reading your other stories.