All Comments on 'A Cliche worth Exploring... Ch. 03'

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stroudlestroudleabout 6 years ago
Tender and sweet

Thank you for adding another chapter to Lily and Roses story.

DKMurphy220DKMurphy220about 6 years ago
Very good

I do hope you continue this. You're very talented,

NocturnalesNocturnalesover 5 years ago

I love your style of writing

I can’t wait to read more of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well done.

Nice thought out writing. Continuation of this story is requested

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved this story

Well written with a great build up with true feelings between the two of them. Great love story going here and would be a true travesty to end it here. True tenderness with genuine feelings plus the reader can visualize the girls cute butts and fine legs/perky breasts. This story has legs and should survive for many more chapters with some very sensual sex. Great job 👌

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bummer

A shame you haven’t gone farther with this. You were going so well...

JoeybagofdonutsJoeybagofdonutsover 3 years ago
Very tender and sweet

I really loved it. Please keep it going. I for one appreciate the time and energy it takes to write.

XOXO

Joey.

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