All Comments on 'A Coin has Two Sides'

Interesting scenario and not without humor. Was about to say that this short piece lacked erotica, but erotic was not necessary.

Changing POV every few lines? Uh, no. I get what you were trying to accomplish, but even in a story this short, it's just a jumbled mess.

I loved it, a different perspective on fear. I really did like the perspectives it built the story as we the readers were voyeurs watching and listing in character. I was clinical but entertaining and clever.