All Comments on 'A Cold Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Exciting story but confusing to read

It was one of the best I have read in a long time, but before it ends it started the story again just to finish on the second page.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great male dominant erotica!

Excellent erotic story!! I wish I were her, :D!

The only thing is you accidentally added the beginning again into the middle somehow(maybe a copy and paste error?), but the story was great nevertheless!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

In the middle of the story, it starts over again. Then you have to go to page 2 to try and find your correct place. Is there a way to edit it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

You posted the beginning of the story twice.

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