All Comments on 'A College Affair'

i liked your story, but i do think you need to re-read and edit, or get someone else to edit for you because i don't know how deedra felt about being given multiple 'organisms'

Very erotic and sensitive. A believable tender story filled with eroticism and excitement.

their time together was deliciously erotic and i loved how you wrote about what happened when they parted, most submissions here end abrubtly but yours was magnificent. I cant wait to read more from you :]

cheating skank. Author that relies on a 'huge cock' to make his nonexistent plot seem real. Rest is superfluous.

This is a wonderful story! Well written, and very erotic!