All Comments on 'A Comfort Woman'

This is a copy of a couple of Cagivagurl stories, no credit given and the ending changed. Pretty cheap, man.

Really well told. Excellent writing. Great story!

The nickname of Patrick is Paddy. Patty is a girl’s name or nickname for Patricia.

That was really good and definitely none the worse for skipping all the pointless backstory about how they met etc.

My only criticism is that it was a shame there was no update on Marlene. It would've been interesting to know how she fared post-divorce, after being instantly dumped for cheating. She must've had crazy amount of regret for misjudging her husband so badly, and flushing her marriage in such a stupid way.

Good stuff, well said. Thank you.

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Better than most but you wrote Marlene to be a goddamn retard and that is a cardinal sin.

She would have known it was an affair. She would have known it was wrong, she would not have been so obtuse so as to keep saying the same fucking thing as though it made it better.

All you had yo do was write her to be an average person and this would have been a great story, instead you left the retard out.

Very good story.

Thank you for sharing.

Nice. Thanks for sharing.

"And rule number one is that nothing trumps fidelity!"

/ Aye rhetthebrat Aye!

Best quote today for me.

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Stupid Marlene. Just couldn't believe she's that SO STUPID.

Really got me HOW STUPID a Marlene can get. Stupid female.

boring

To be honest, the strength of your story lies in the rejection of infidelity and spousal betrayal and disrespect, as shown by hubby and his new wife. My philosophy concerning the whole marriage thing is why get hitched if you are not fully committed to talking the talk and walking the walk. Anything less is hypocrisy. Anyway, a nicely developed tale

That was a good story, first one I have read from your stack. You write the dialogue really well.

Like the story. AAAA++++

A real quandary about scoring this one. Likes: He admitted he might be a bit at fault. Likes: Once he made up his mind, he never wavered. Dislikes: Way to many times having to read ' you fucked him for three weeks' Dislikes: How the wife kept saying it meant nothing. Either Jason was a lousy lay, or Marlene didn't have any idea what she was doing.

"...And the two shall become one flesh." Is that so hard to understand? Too bad Marlene didn't get the memo. I liked the reasoning behind the Patrick's thoughts regarding his marriage. And while in some instances marriages can be salvaged in the face of infidelity, in this case it would have been a hard sell. Marlene's logic for having sex with Jason was beyond belief. How shallow and slow of wit is Marlene? She had to be brain dead to not see how wrong she was in 'comforting' Jason? And Jason does not get a pass, his grief not withstanding. Having sex for three weeks with the wife of your best friend should be a death penalty offense! It certainly isn't without precedent! 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 - TANSTAAFL

a friend wouldnt allow his friends wife to stay overnight let alone for 3 weeks. should have been a blaring red flag and shouldnt have allowed it

Great story!

5

Not sure about that🤔

A good story, with very reasonable reactions from the characters. Then, it goes to pot, starting with Patrick not facing any legal repercussions for his assault on Jason? Then there is no backlash from Jason for the destruction of his cars? If Patrick can set up an alibi for his attack on Jason's car, why can not Jason do the same and get his revenge? The story started with potential, but, went to pot.

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Pasqual

Well-written, neat, concise and clear. Thanks.

The only problem, as so often, is with the revenge. Adultery is not a crime but Patty's actions were, and serious ones. If, stupidly, you fuck a friend's wife, seriously regret it and seek forgiveness, you are going to be highly pissed if he beats you up and destroys your property. He may have a (feeble) alibi for the damage but the injuries he inflicted will require hospital treatment and the hospital will tell the police.

Excellent! Nuff said.

The wife was a total dolt. D

A non-cheating Indian woman? They are there instead of children's comics about pink ponies and unicorns watching the Kama Sutra. And if she decides to convince some peasant farmer not to kill or eat a cow in exchange for sex and goodbye fidelity in marriage. And it will be again: "You don't understand anything! This is my religion, the beliefs of my ancestors! I had to prevent it at all costs! What about freedom of conscience and religion? You are a tyrant and a hypocrite who condones eating the meat of sacred animals."

Excellent story. Some people can never fathom the meaning of fidelity. 5 stars and a fave!

Well that was weird and short.

It was also entertaining, thanks

Good story. Marlene broke her vows and his trust when she fucked Jason not once but for three weeks. Her continually down playing her affair with Jason tells you all you need to know about her character. Obviously her needs to console others trumps any loyalty to her husband. Jason certainly wasn't much of a friend either. Glad you gave him a set of balls to move on and find a trustworthy partner.

The fact that you used a term in your story's title, "Comfort Woman", that has a denigrating history from its use by the Japanese during WW2, is repugnant to me. One star.

A righteous non-cuck. Refreshing.

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If there were some deficiencies in the short tale, it would include not having a verbal confrontation with Jason before cleaning his clock…if only to wipe any smirk off his face. And maybe to have it out with his relatives about their support of the “comfort woman”…especially after his successful marriage to Prisha.

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Marlene is, of course, yet another in a long line of Martian Slut Ray victims….without which these tales would be nigh impossible 😎

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4 ****

Very nice. Loved your statement about sacrifice and monogamy being hard.

Very good story. Loved your MC's logic about her affair, how to treat her, and how to treat an ignorant family. Then you totally ignored the fate of the cheating bitch and concentrated on the MC. Some will bitch about that but, really, who cares about her.

it started out pretty well, then it really became nothing more than a cliche, with not much of a story. I'll give it an extra star for not being a cuck story.

We barely heard anything from the cum slut. A little disappointing

It always bothers me when the main character gets so pissed he just deletes messages and blocks the ex. At least listen to what is said. THEN ignore it. But this was a decent story about man whose sense of fidelity was important I'd have liked ot hear more of the conversations with his family. Did they honestly not think the 3 week affair was nothing or did they think he was over-reacting to something that might not have happened. He certainly appeared to react quick. Later discussion would have rounded that part out well. I still gave this 5 stars.

One more comment. Why the question in the description line. "Did my wife...etc?" You started at the beginning with that fact established.

But what happened to Marlene? Finish the damn story!

I want to pose a question. If when you get married and the 1st part of you vows are forsaking all other. Then someone cheats, how is it the offended spouses fault if the cheater did keep their vows? It funny how you need to find fault in thing you did during the marriage to justify the cheater's cheating.

Rather than being told of Marlene that "she was kind and generous and bright, and she made me laugh all the time" I wish that I could have been shown it. The Marlene I actually meet in the story is shallow and delusional. For her betrayal to have an emotional impact, I first need to like her. Perhaps you could have begun the story at the funeral.

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Jason is another problem. Best friend since 12, yet again I don't feel the sting of betrayal, because I never really meet the guy in the story. Instead I get just some summary about the MC's revenge.

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The Mercy Fuck trope is a fertile area for LW drama. How does the MC react when his wife, who genuinely loves her husband, fucks a mutual friend because of her being so kind and generous? Such a story needs space in order to develop it to its full potential --- more space than you've given it here.

Fair ending, not perfect, admitting he had faults as well, no self-righteousness. Counselor trying to OK sex by suggesting Marlene's fucking was OK because it wasn't love was idiotic. If you love someone you don't cheat on them just because a pal needs comforting!

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz, this story has been done hundreds of times, and better.

Started out with some potential — maybe a tongue-in-cheek spoof. Alas, became repetitious, shrill not to mention unoriginal.

Waiting for the usual cum lickers to tell us that she and her pussy was still the same after consoling and fucking his friend for 3 weeks. They'll also try to tell us she was a beacon of holiness and virtue for doing her saintly deed. I'm sure she will treasure the memory for the rest of her life. Good to see a husband with a set of balls that wasn't rolled over by her bullshit. 5*

Good for him to never back down. She cheated, he left. Perfect.

Bare bones. Great story if fleshed out and finished.

Far better than the average here, and somewhat insightful. The "blame spreading" at the end was poorly thought through...idiotic, really. Still, 5

Seems unfinished.

What happened to his first wife?

I think the admission of "I was wrong" would have gone a long way to save their marriage. He was right. With their opposing views on fidelity, he could never trust her.

Well written without any confusion as to the story plot. You set rules and follow them. Trust is extremely important. 5*. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you. 5*****! I really liked that. Several times your response to the wife's attempt to pass over the seriousness of the situation left me thinking, "Why have I not heard that before?!" Also, I was expecting it to be an older couple where one person had become more complacent about their sexual issues, but you made it work.

Why does the description have a question format when it's answered in the very first sentence?

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"He needed someone to care. He needed comforting. He needed a physical touch to help with his emotional healing." - I'll say the same things I've said in other stories where the wife was "comforting" someone: There are no single women to "comfort" him?

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"Stop acting like a petulant child. No one stole your toys." - Belittling her husband's feelings is never a good strategy.

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"I see your ego is bruised" - Again with the fucking "ego." Like HER ego would be fine if he "consoled" her best friend by fucking her!

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"I've got everything to make lasagna." - What is it with Loving Wives and lasagna? I like lasagna as much as the next guy, but for some reason LW treats it like chicken soup in a Jewish family.

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"Do you believe that people can make mistakes? That one act doesn't define a person?" - This wasn't a mistake, it was a deliberate act, which she is still defending. You apologize for a mistake, admit that it was wrong.

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"Mars may have doomed us, but I wasn't without fault." - He WASN'T at fault. A commitment to monogamy is a reasonable expectation that shouldn't need to be made explicit.

Not a bad read, and like the premise but just not much closure on the ex part which would've tied the loose ends up completely. Need more details and felt like I was reading a summary recap instead of an actual story.

Nice work, thank you. Good to see a protagonist who stays true to his principles, regardless of whether or not I agree with thosy principles.

If ever anyone actually needs to deal with this in real life:

"Don't hang up! We need to talk! If you hang up I'll call right back. And I'll keep calling until you agree to meet with me to resolve this whole thing." - it's harassment and/or trespass -- call the cops and report it.

Also, call your techies and have it blocked at the VOIP, PBX, or KSU level.

I don't usually comment on stories, because I feel that with most of writers on this site, I'm wasting my time. However, you only have few stories here, so maby you are willing to learn.

The basic probelm with this story is that the premise is not credible, and the wife character is not credible. You may have heard of the Martian Slut Ray. It's the concept where a female story character, who is set up as smart and loving, is then made by the author to do something completely out of character sexually, for no valid reason.

You've done that with your wife character, and that destroys the entire story. No sane woman has sex with a friend because she feels sorry for them, tells her husband, and then acts as if it's nothing. You try to save it at the end by having the husband say to himself that there were communication issues, but that rings hollow. The problem is not that the husband did not properly communicate his feelings about infidelity. The problem is that the wife is impossibly nuts. Worse, the ending doesn't really tell us anything. We and the husband never learn why the wife went nuts.

If you really want to go with this premise, then you have to have more in the counseling sessions about why she did it. Compassion for a hurt friend is BS, and the husband should say so. Maybe she just wanted the friend, saw an opening and thought she could get away with it? But if that were true, then why tell him about her cheating and expect that he would think that it's okay? Why would she think it's okay? What if the situation were reversed, and he cheated with a friend for three weeks?

So, my main advice is to spend more time thinking about your characters as people, and not simply as props for your story idea.

A very funny story (what woman can be stupid enough to think that three weeks of fucking with another won't do any harm), with a very serious core message: In a marriage, fidelity is an ace of trumps.!

pretty good read but the ending sucked

I enjoyed this. It would have been better with more details after the counseling/divorce. Also, I always enjoy a scene where the wife has a conversation demonstrating that she realizes what she did. You gave us no dialogue from the wife after the first counseling session. I would have liked more, but keep writing.

A man of integrity, selfworth and commitment. It would have been nice to hear a bit more about Marlene's misery and Jason's suffering but in retrospect, simply leaving them in the rear view is what they deserve. I really liked this one.

Unfortunately, another story that requires the wife to be a fucking moron.

Despite what some thing, there is a phenomenon that matches the "Martian slut ray," albeit not using actual Martians. Those of us who know divorce attorneys or marriage counselors know it happens.

I do think the wife was too blase about it, though.

Yes, I can see how two really close friends could make a mistake in the emotional depths of anguish and despair. But just once and then they return to their senses and are embarrassed and guilty for having crossed a line. They agree to never allow themselves to be in the situation again and they pledge never to speak of what occurred. That is a MISTAKE, fucking for thee weeks is not a mistake. She completely abandoned her marriage and she damn well knew it.

A sad story that didn't need to turn out that way. Women intuitively know that there are many reasons for sex, and very few have to do with either love or lust. There is healing sex, grief sex, celebration sex, we are all going to die sex, and the list goes on, none of which should affect the marriage bond. Most men do not have a clue about understanding this. All they think of is ownership.

During my marriage, I sent my wife to a friend in an identical situation as this, to comfort and help him heal. That is why this story hit me so hard that it hurt. And several years after, my wife sent me to console a close friend of hers in a similar situation. That is true love and honor. Not this bullshit

Pretty good but I didn't like the Indian-Irish combo. It just felt wrong.

on every point that I would have mentioned

Enough with the clichés come up with something original

Women can't possibly think this way right?? That's it's no big deal and can just get past it. Although it would have been interesting to hear what Jason had to say, and then beat his ass.

Let’s see, that’s about the 10,000th time this story has been written. Only the names have been changed.

So did Jason come and comfort Marlene after the divorce? Did Marlene go and comfort Jason after he was beat up? Did they eventually marry? Need another story about them.

Good take on the classic “wife takes care of sick/dying/widowed friend.”

Husband was a typical ignorant, stupid male for acting like that and taking the actions he did.

Somehow I expected his ex to end up with Jason.

I understand he doesn't want to know what happened to his ex after the divorce, but I as reader would like to know what happened. I also woudl like to know what her family and friends told her when she explained her cheating to them.

And lastly, I would like to know what Jason was thinking when he fucked his best friends wife? How did he want to explain it?

The thing that got me on this one was that she had absolutely no remorse for getting into bed with Jason. She wanted to justify it and never even took the time to try and understand his rage and how she had betrayed him.

I feel like this story could have been longer and explored more into his recovery, it would have been good to understand how she moved on, broke down, etc. Lastly it felt like there was a huge blank when it came to his family that was like an elephant in the room.

It was a good story, however a few gaps that may have brought it up to the next level.

Could have been a good story. You wrote the man character very well, as most writers here always do for the men, but you made the wife the exact same idiotic, slow witted, stuck on repeat wife that 99% of "writers" do here.

There was no effort to make her believable, she had like one sentence said 12 different ways, and really, for the sake of clarity, no wife would "console" someone for 3 weeks with that "consoling" being sex. Also she stayed 3 weeks? Even without sex....sorry kid that is just another stupid log you tossed on the fire.

We get it most "writers" pretend women think with their vaginas the way men do with their dicks but they dont.

Other than getting cheers from the lowest common denominator in the readership, others will think along the same line as I do. You took a lazy and easy way through a story, the exact same story with the exact same wife done a hundred times over here.

Try harder, put in some effort and make the wife as intelligent as the husband is (we know why that rarely happens too, dont we) and make the story work that way. Unless the knuckle draggers cheers makes your day, in which case skip everything I said.

How about that? An engaging well written story the author did NOT fuck up at the end. Hallelujah!

Well conceived, well written.

It wasn't a bad story but, for some reason that's hard to put into words, it lacked passion. Everything was "matter of fact" from the infidelity reveal, to divorce, and tha quick ending with happily ever after. Overall writing style was solid, just missing content. 3*

For three weeks she slipped and fell on to that guy's dick? That had to hurt😁😋

Anon about six hours ago wrote, in part: "the ending doesn't really tell us anything. We and the husband never learn why the wife went nuts.

If you really want to go with this premise, then you have to have more in the counseling sessions about why she did it. "

I completely disagree. The husband knows all he needs to know. One way or another the wife was consistently cheating for three weeks with his former best friend and she believes it was nothing and she did the right thing and that her husband is being unreasonable. There is no coming back from that and no reason for further counselling. There is simply nothing she can say at that point that makes any difference. Whether it was inconsistent with what she was previously may make a difference as to whether her actions and reaction in minimizing them were believable, but it certainly doesn't mean more counselling will help or that he should consider reconciliation.

Great story. Finally, a story about a man who won’t accept that his cheating wife was only comforting a hurting friend every day for two weeks. He dumped the bitch, and gave the hurting friend a little more pain. I enjoyed it.

Summary/tagline: “Did my wife cheat with my friend Jason?”

Like it’s some big fuckin mystery. But that question is answered in the first few lines. So really the story is “my wife fucked my best friend but said she was just offering him a kindness”… which of course is also pretty fuckin stupid

What or who gets the house?

LOVE. Slap-hapy-papy #9

What a terrible fucking story. Never been in love, eh?

Not a bad story but judges can't order counseling. I think a lot of authors here need to know about what they write about.

This is another LW trope, the wife 'comforting' someone who was sick, lost a spouse, etc. Sometimes the wife is dim witted and is seduced, other times is she figures she can use it as an excuse.

Is he at fault for not communicating? No,he isn't, it sounds like he is that type of guy and if she didn't know that it would mean she literally didn't pay attention to him.

The problem with this trope is quite honestly it doesn't work in real life, it is the Martian slut ray.No woman is going to fuck a guy for 3 weeks and come home and admit it, no fucking way. If he had found out, maybe, but this? No way unless she knew he was into being cuckolded.

Two scenarios are possible. One is she felt the urge, had sex with him, and then felt bad, didn't tell him.

Second which I have seen, she fell in love with him when she stayed with him,that happens. She would tell husband in that case and want a divorce.

Another problem is the wife can't comprehend why he is upset and keeps things him,including on therapy, that it was no big deal and tells him she is sorry she hurt him but not sorry for what she did.

BTW a therapist would never, ever in a situation like this allow the wife to keep defending it with the bullshit excuse she gave. They would tell her that by doing so she was erasing the husband. In the face of the wife's actions, they would not allow her to excuse it, they would tell her if she wanted to rebuild the relationship she had to make amends for what she did, not excuse them, and show real remorse. The way this is written it sounds like the therapist is blaming him for not trying, in reality they would understand there is no trying until the guilty party admits their guilt, apologizes for their actions and begs forgiveness, something she never does.

Another weak point, what family would condone a wife cheating on their kid like this,pressure him to take her back? Even if they like her, that doesn't show a lot of love for him,...and why does the moron go back for more punishment with them?

And yeah, I agree not letting us know what happens with the ex leaves a huge hole. IRL if she is not insane she will realize for her own sake she has to admit what she did was wrong, otherwise she could do it again. If she doesn't work that out then she will end up repeating her mistake. If she finally realizes that she cheated bc she wanted to she would need to get in touch with him and apologize for her actions. Again IRL few women, faced w a divorce, would be stupid enough to keep saying it was no big deal. Quite honestly if she did the therapist would tell the judge it was useless to try and save the marriage.

Finally, a story about a man who has self respect and doesn't allow a cheating slut back in his life. 5 stars!

I'm not going to over the top levels to critique your story. It was a good quick read. Keep plugging away.

Why most writers end stories like this with another marriage and children?

That is a boring way to finish the story of a bad breakup. We don't need to have a partner to be happy. Most of the time, that situation give us more problems than satisfaction. Fairytales are not real.... ***

I enjoyed your story very much and it had a good premise. I would have liked to heard mire about why his family thought what his wife did was ok and how they felt after he found a new wife. I also agree with other comments that it had to be more about the sex than just the comfort. Three weeks of sex with someone else was something the wife was looking for and the grief was just an excuse. So glad to see the husband stay true to his beliefs.

Liked your story in spite of the plausibility of the plot.

I really liked the story and where it seems to be going but it seems unfinished.

I liked your story. Good job

The least realistic aspect of the story was the wife telling him about sleeping with his best friend for three weeks. Women just do not do that. Women are more capable of compartmentalizing their lives and are more duplicitous in nature. That's "why" they get away with cheating so often.

One of the very similar stories is nici's "Something We Have to Talk About," where the wife has been "comforting" a guy whose wife was killed in a car crash when he had been driving, and expects her husband to accept a continuing relationship. nici wrote a two chapter follow-up, and there have been others as well, notably Tx Tall Tales, "Something... Talk About in Tx."

I had to laugh at the cum licker "Ic69hunter's" comment. He actually blamed the husband,. He's trying to tell us he actually send his wife to a friend of his to console him. Now if that isn't the definition of a "cuck" I don't know what is. This story is weird. Who in their right mind allows a wife to stay with another man for three weeks, even if it is his best friend. Boggles the mind. No man, emphasis on the "man" would take a wife back after fucking another for three weeks and show no remorse. No man. Period. End of discussion.

One reader asked the question. Never been in love? Eh. A puzzler. Mind explaining yourself. By the way he thinks this is a terrible fucking story. Wonder if he's related to that cuck "Ic69hunter"? The willing cuck most likely would cheer this wife on. Fuck the marriage vows, they mean nothing, just words. Got a question: do cucks even bother taking the vows when they marry the wives they intend to turn into sluts and whores, just so they can get their rocks off. Hey cucks, care to give me an answer.

Hey ic69hunter!! I'm depressed. Can you send your wife over to use her special healing powers on me?? Got a buddy also with a tooth ache. I'll send her to him when I'm healed.

I'm glad he found an actual loyal wife. However, would have been nice to see the cheater suffer more, like them run into each other down the road with the new wife and kids, etc.

I liked it, scores 4/5

short but well done. I liked and enjoyed reading it.

4*s would have been a 5 if you at least gave some follow up to Marlene as well as his family. ;0)

3 stars and that is because it is not finished.

It's not finished, and who really has to have their own finish.

If it was finished and a number readers would like it and a number would hate the finish

If your so needing it finished then write it yourself.

I'm not the author. I'm not a friend of the author either.

I gave It a rating of 5. RCD

cheating equals done. Once married, always married, you take vows you make a promise you break the promise, end of marriage.