All Comments on 'A Costly Tease'

Good premise.

But lacks details.

We don't need to know THAT she kees him on the edge for 30 minutes. We need to know EXACTLY HOW she does it. Step by step.

And nothing with the rest of her body? Nothing with her breasts? Her ass?

No titty fucking? No rubbing his face with her tits? No sucking her nipples?

And while she sits on his face, she doesn't force him to tongue her ass?

Three stars.

Wow! What a great ride! This was quite creative. Maybe when she comes back tonight and ties him up, she calls his wife and places the phone next to him and he has to hold a conversation with his wife as Angela teases him and keeps him on edge.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Perfect. I love the suspence and the mind games. I equally love that it had a good end. I would love a sequel, but I see how it would be hard ^^

Awesome story - nothing better than edging and face sitting and denial.

One of the BEST!!

Great work

Amazing! Hope there's a sequel coming!

Loved the story.

Like everyone else, I love this story and I think you should seriously consider a sequel

This story was very entertaining. Thanks for sharing. If I could offer one piece of advice, look at the formatting of your paragraphs. Some of them are rather unnecessarily long and that creates more work for the reader.

Very hot. Love it.

Don't jump around in your tenses.

"He exploded" (past tense), or

"He explodes" (present tense).

Just pick one and stay with it for the entire story.

Most stories use past tense.

But good writing otherwise, and extremely sexy.

You write very well and this story is well paced and believable. Very clever twist at the end there.

Good premise.

Needed to slow down. More details. More involvement of the rest of her body. Her breasts. Her ass.

Maybe force him to rim her.

Four stars.

I hope someone ties her up in the woods naked and leaves her to be raped as well. He didn't deserve that and she is rude and cruel.

I really do hope he calls the police on her.

OMG your stories are driving me crazy and I so want to be Victor! OMG 🔥