All Comments on 'A Cougar Totally Turned Ch. 05'

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elle_9549elle_9549almost 12 years ago

My god, this story is driving me absolutely insane! In a good way, of course. I'm not quite sure how I feel about Sheri having other pets (much like how Julia felt, I imagine) but I do get the distinction between their relationship and whatever it is that Sheri has with the other girls. I'm loving this amazing story - thank you. ~ L

1Martiniman1Martinimanalmost 12 years ago
Spectacular!

"I knew a girl named Nikki I guess you say she was a sex fiend. I met her in a hotel lobby masturbating in a magazine"...Prince

You have to love those hot, sexy girls named Nikki, and Sheri's pet didnt disappoint. Another spectacular chapter that has me ready to race off and read chapter six. Not your normal or average D/s story and I find that quite refreshing, and the style used to show emotion is fun and fabulous. A must read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
par excellence.

It is what we have come to expect. This author maintains a high standard in all of herstories.

RK.

JogrindeJogrindeabout 11 years ago
That was Loaded!!

I simply love the flow and the level of continuation and reality to the story as well as the humour, Julia is wicked as always, she has a brilliant personality! Love her little comments like " She looked at my swollen, sodden center as if she was viewing a cherished work of art. Yeah, I know, that was way over the top. It's my story and I'll embellish when I feel like it." Brilliant

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is driwing me nuts !

What are those 5 words? You have mentioned them again and again thru the last 3 chapters. Will there be a resolution? With all that foreshadowing it had better be more than good. Or did I just not notice them at the start of the sequence?

You are an amazingly competent author, every plotsegment dovetailing and characters with hearts and souls. So wonderful to encounter in this field where the norm is "tits bigger than her head, and legs so long they go all the way up to heaven".

Thank you.

love VvV

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
SMOKING

AWESOME.... i am sure the lava of a volcano cant beat this chapters heat

DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
I'm With Elle

If Sheri and Julia are going to be in a committed relationship, even if it is a Domme/Sub one, Sheri needs to give up her other pets, maybe after graduation?

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Just Gets Better and Better!

I just can't believe how much this story has its hooks into me!

Gotta finish these up so that I can get a life, LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
AVixenLiterally. ___ It's Just Too Bad !!!!!!!!!

It's too bad that you couldn't work it out !

S_P_L_ Lynda.

idrubloodidrubloodover 9 years ago
Sublime...

And sexy as all that!

IDB.

Bridget69Bridget69over 4 years ago
Extra spice

With the addition of Nikki to turn up the heat. If I were Julia, I would want to sample the entire softball team AND the entire sorority house. Just imagine all the young babes! I just hope that introducing other "players" will only enhance their relationship and not compromise it in any way.

Bridget69Bridget69over 4 years ago

With the addition of Nikki to turn up the heat. If I were Julia, I would want to sample the entire softball team AND the entire sorority house. Just imagine all the young babes! I just hope that introducing other "players" will only enhance their relationship and not compromise it in any way.

Bridget69Bridget69over 4 years ago
A bit more spice...

by adding Nikki to turn up the heat. If I were Julia, I would want to sample the entire softball team AND the entire sorority house. I just hope that this will just enhance their relationship and not compromise it in any way.

ErinzeasyErinzeasyabout 4 years ago
What a shame

Sadly, the addition of the other subs destroyed a beautiful story. Obviously written by a man for a mans tastes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh well

It was a good story up to this point. You write well no doubt just didn’t care for the addition. Also wish there’s a bit more drama.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Getting Better, Growing Strongef

Well that's about it. A little confusing in places but what a story; hope and love seem so mingled up and hardly surprising given where Julia has been found for 25 years and Sheri is so powerful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why gloss over the strap on part? That could have been so wonderful

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