All Comments on 'A Cougar's Conquests Ch. 01: Ollie'

Love the description - exquisite detail of her blowjob! Only suggest maybe a bit more detail on her appearance and atttire.

very well written looking forward to the next chapter

Tight shorts and sleeveless jumper? And wriggled rather than wiggled? It doesn't sound like Ollie was playing American Football.

Lue

Ps: I like my stories of young men with older ladies to have ladies with a few more years than Lisa, but it was a good one regardless.

Lue

Superb. Looking forward to seeing her get thoroughly slutty with her gorgeous young fucktoy.

Hey thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated...esp given this is my first story published here (I've written a few gay stories published elsewhere). I hear what you say about it would be good to have more....physical detail about Lisa....fair comment I reckon. Problem is that...it's him that does it for me....not her lol

Will

All that and she didn't slide down his pole? Maybe you're saving it for next time. I bet next time he comes over he brings a friend or two. Then if she's really twisted she can entice them into sucking each other off! While she's fucking the third!

R.

Wonderful story. Wish a cougar would have seduced me when I was 18. Please continue

Not only should Lisa get to finish devirgining Ollie, but telling of other conquests would be GREATLY appreciated!

Now that's fascinating Will. To have a gay man writing a story about a cougar's conquests of young men is something I've not seen here before.

Unlike BIgJay, I don't think your stories need much about Lisa's physical appearance or her own sexuality. The details of her technique in achieving the conquest were the key to the story.

Lue

Hehe....yeah well I have no doubt that somewhere along the line Lisa will be sliding very nicely down Ollie's fine upstanding pole...;-)

And as for bringing along a couple of....team mates....haha...seems you read my mind...;-)

Will

Next story, involving a rather more experienced 20yo BMX biker boy is mostly written....should be posted next week....;-)

Will

I like "dirty talk", but mainly when it comes from the girl. All of the dirty talk seemed to come from the guy.

What a well written story. Thanks for sharing.

Too young to be a MILF but definitely in cougar territory? I stopped read at this point, obviously the writer doesn't understand the terminology he's using. A cougar is much older than a MILF.

Super hot. Love focus on the young studs! More!

interesting plot with two engaging characters. The prelude sets the story, and you do a fine job of extending the foreplay. The blow jobs were excellently described. The ending came too soon, but it was appropriate and sets up the next chapter.

Wonderful story, great read