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by DragonOctavia

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SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar8 months ago

Not bad for a first; could use a proofread for punctuation and the prose is a bit dry, but that'll work itself out with practice. I wish we could've seen the romance as it blossomed, but I suppose it puts you in a bind if they've only come of age that night.

jk697jk6977 months ago

Prefer using strap-on than dd

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I am a fan of a good hot story and fantasy tale. I have been a reader here off and on for several years and now decided to join in on the publishing. I mainly do RP on MnF Club, and can find me there under the same name