All Comments on 'A Couple of Wishes Pt. 07'

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Anonymous9 months ago

Please continue to write this story, it's way too good to end here.

ShelbyDawn57 6 months ago

I binged all six chapters. This is a very creative story line and extremely well written. Just a few proofreading errors here and there, and a slight continuity issue with who the wishes can effect. At first they decide they can only effect them as they are drinking the wine, but Jessy's last wish is to share the gift with their kids. Sort of works since Ash and Jessy don't actually know for sure the scope of the wishes, besides, as the previous commenter noted, there need to be additional chapters to complete the story... Please...

sissylily2018 5 months ago

I loved this story. Please continue this and give it a real ending

Latextechnonerdswitch 4 months ago

Amazing! Absolutely loved it….. keep going!

Fire_Hazard 4 months ago

Eagerly awaiting the next part. Looking forward to these two exploring their new sex life!

Anonymousabout 2 months ago

My favorite story I have read in a very long time! The ultimate fantasy

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Firstly I'd like to apologize for all my proofreading errors. I write the vast majority of my work on the phone in stolen time here and there. I know I need an editor. I would also love to have some folks who could beta read for me. If you are interested in either please reach...

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