by Twotooto222
The idiot who commented is just that, as he read every word to the ending.
Get a life,brain dead.
This was an enjoyable, different story. The characters were well designed.
Thanks Don
these are simple hillbillies, engaged in inbreeding, incest, bestiality etc. genetically screwed up excuses for human beings
I don't normally give a five, but even tho this is a loooong story, I did give it a five. I even came back tonight to finish it. Will be looking for more storys about this couple or any couple you wish to write about.
Thank You, for a very good read.^5
I liked the story, however some of the typos were distracting along with jumping around a bit. Suddenly they were in the bedroom interacting with Maggie without going into the bedroom. It's sexy but could use some editing.
you sill don't know the difference......
Your story rates 1* for showing up.
Would have been more if it had been more than, "She fucks everything that walks and he fucks a chippy. They're so hot we all want to be like them, right?", NO!
Besides annoying me with your lousy punctuation and spelling, your story wasn't really a story at all.
You could have said all that in four paragraphs and probably entertained us better.
Look, you got guts but lack the necessary self respect to get it right before you unload it.
Get your technical work right, tell a story worth reading and you'll get better ratings.
Loved it. What an exciting wife you have. Im still hard just thinking about her getting fucked doggie style with her tits jetting out. Keep it up.
I've read some of your other stories you have a great wife. Cant wait to hear more about her.
Gentle & loving, hard & degrading. 2 men dping your wife, you w nubile enthusiastic Maggie who Brandi is enthused over..... why would other commentators be complaining about the length? Lots to fit in, like in Brandi's so willing cunt. Agree that there's 5 or so stupid typos, but the characterization & sexual explorations were over the top fine. Could publish it many places.....
Plastic Barbie blow-up doll and a 9cm dicked juden pimp. What a bleak, pathetic, empty existence.
And I call bullshit on all of the mens' orgasms. Two in one nite is about the max average. Any more is a figment of a drug-addled brain.