by e142394
Would make a splendid movie
Sweet first effort, lots going on here. I would have liked to hear a little bit more about the husband-wife team, their feelings and just the hint of a background, maybe some visual descriptions of the setting (sky? air temperature?) but most importantly the emotions. No surprise the husband is excited, but public sex displays come off as casual - really? But keen sense of excitement and voyeur arousal, sounds like the husband needs another penis to play with...
Very simple yet very sexy. Would love to go there with my wife. Cheers 🥂