by paragon of virtue
Loved your story, writing style, dialogues and characters--not just in this entry but in the previous entries as well. Please keep writing!
would have been better if he knew her (but he supposedly had a really small one). And this sentence is an utter classic: "When you have ejaculated all over your psychologist, of course you are going to be discomfited." I almost pissed myself when I read that!
Yasmin's a helluva woman!!! Very well etched characterisation, must say.
Extremely well written story! Would love to read about Balbir's wedding night.
What elegant english!what exquisite story!i wish i could write like you...
balbir comes
yasmin has her periods
offers her assistant, a newly married girl
how she copes with the big stick of sardar, of course with yasmin help.
go on sir
you are great
well written, I wonder if its all true, as this kind of imagination only a gifted novelist can sputter so splendidly....
loved all ur stories...another great one here...
awaiting to read more from you...cheers !