All Comments on 'A Cure For Stuttering'

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MadamWMadamWover 13 years ago
Brava bravissima

Loved your story, writing style, dialogues and characters--not just in this entry but in the previous entries as well. Please keep writing!

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Classic! The King's Speech

would have been better if he knew her (but he supposedly had a really small one). And this sentence is an utter classic: "When you have ejaculated all over your psychologist, of course you are going to be discomfited." I almost pissed myself when I read that!

hottie_nikitahottie_nikitaalmost 13 years ago
Wow!!!

Yasmin's a helluva woman!!! Very well etched characterisation, must say.

Extremely well written story! Would love to read about Balbir's wedding night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
eloquent!

What elegant english!what exquisite story!i wish i could write like you...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
why not give a chance to yamin's assistant

balbir comes

yasmin has her periods

offers her assistant, a newly married girl

how she copes with the big stick of sardar, of course with yasmin help.

go on sir

you are great

sexualsedativesexualsedativeabout 9 years ago
Splendid, I am your FAN !

well written, I wonder if its all true, as this kind of imagination only a gifted novelist can sputter so splendidly....

loved all ur stories...another great one here...

awaiting to read more from you...cheers !

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