by paragon of virtue
well written, I wonder if its all true, as this kind of imagination only a gifted novelist can sputter so splendidly....
loved all ur stories...another great one here...
awaiting to read more from you...cheers !
balbir comes
yasmin has her periods
offers her assistant, a newly married girl
how she copes with the big stick of sardar, of course with yasmin help.
go on sir
you are great
What elegant english!what exquisite story!i wish i could write like you...
Yasmin's a helluva woman!!! Very well etched characterisation, must say.
Extremely well written story! Would love to read about Balbir's wedding night.
would have been better if he knew her (but he supposedly had a really small one). And this sentence is an utter classic: "When you have ejaculated all over your psychologist, of course you are going to be discomfited." I almost pissed myself when I read that!
Loved your story, writing style, dialogues and characters--not just in this entry but in the previous entries as well. Please keep writing!