by Verynicehands
I loved how these women seduced Paul and how the story came together. The remaining mystery of what was not said by Abbie and Renee makes me curious and hungry for what I hope will be further chapters, perhaps with Dana? I was surprised that Paul did not partake of getting up close and personal with his tongue on Abbie's pussy.
Your inclusion of Paul's premature ejaculation was wonderful. As one who suffers from this more often than not, I appreciate bringing it into the light.