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All Comments on 'A D/s Love Story'

by Steve1613

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

ok story but you need to edit this again because some of the paragraphs were repeats which took away from the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
VERY NICE!

Well written and very erotic... made me hot! I do enjoy your subject matter and your presentation!!

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