All Comments on 'A Dark Desire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

That was incredible. I read in your bio that you are a man. I find that to be very suprising. You did a great job of writing this story from a feminine perspective.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Outstanding

I can hardly believe you are a male. A Dark Desire is one of the most descriptive and erotic stories I've ever red.

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
It's too bad....

It's too bad that she did not beg Nathan for his baby juice in that her husband had been fucking around on her. What revenge to him if Nathan had knocked her up with his niggah baby....

Sarahann648Sarahann648over 13 years ago
A Dark Desire

Wow yum this was a very pleasurable ;) story thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Very Hot

This was a beautiful piece of work. Excellent perspective on the woman, I must agree. I like how he wasn't a thug like in so many of the other interracial stories. Thanks! 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice one

Well written without too much bile,as other interracial stories..this is plausable,and a pleasure to read..none of that exaggeration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so sexy..

I love the way you write, it puts you right in the moment and paints a very sexy vision in your head... one of the best I've read on this site

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