All Comments on 'A Daughter Schemes'

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otti1otti15 months ago

Super geschrieben. Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht.

newporter56newporter565 months ago

Very good, hope there are more to follow.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I liked the story; and how you broke it up in succinct progressive scenes. Good storytelling. Need a little touch up in the grammar mechanics to avoid unnecessary distractions. Great work otherwise.

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Beginning writer, long-time fantasizer. I mostly enjoy Incest/Taboo, followed closely by Loving Wives. We swing in real life, so some of my stories likely have some truth to them. Hope y’all enjoy!

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