All Comments on 'A Daughter's Love Ch. 01'

Fantastic story. Need more

Decent story, good sex, and a solid premise. But your focus on the huge business deal distracted from the father daughter romance and didn't seem to add anything to the story. I don't care how the multimillion dollar business deal ended up; I'm sure the rich got richer... How did the father daughter couple end up? Do they live together as a couple? Do they let people know? Babies? You didn't even imply a 'Happily Ever After'... They just fucked and fell asleep.

Very good story, that needs another chapter, that isn't so repetitive.

A great story to stoke to. Chapter 2?

I disagree with the other comments on the business proposition. I thought it was a brilliant idea to this story and made it where father and daughter can be free with their love for a long time. Hope there are more chapters to come!

This story seems very familiar to me. Did you first publish it on xhamster when they were publishing stories? Well written and gently erotic.

Agree I have read this story or one extremely similar previously. Still enjoyed reading it again

I loved the story. The romance and the sex were great. I would have liked a little more physical description of the characters to help build a picture of them in my mind's eye.

For the commenter who wondered how the story turns out, I wonder if the "Ch. 01" in the title gave him a clue that the story wasn't done yet?

Looking forward to the next chapter. Five stars and a favorite point!

@Sex4lf57, you're right. Read the whole story and missed the 'Ch. 01' right there in the title. My bad!

This story was fantastic! Loved the romance and love between Dani and Jake. I hope part 2 comes out soon

I came twice!

Okay this has the makings of a great 5 star story right now this one has a zero because I reserve full judgement until all of a story is there to read same with say harry Potter or some other book series I like to rate them as a whole.... If I were to rate just this one id give it a 4 because even though this story is potentially a 5 there is still room for improvement the narration needs a bit more work and we need more details also for as short as this one was it needs a different style of sex scenes than what's written she is a Virgin so it be nice to actually have her father guiding her in the ways of sex and not all the straight fucking that they are doing... Now that being said its obvious Liz knows what's happening and I suspect you're going to include her at some point be careful there not many people can add a character into an already ongoing relationship and have it realistically work well but that being said I'm open to it if you take it that way... Keep up the fantastic work.... Tell next time

Awww, she loves her daddy so much she saved herself for him all this time. That's beautiful. I wish them all the best.

Dani really sounds like a truly amazing woman. Ridiculously attractive (they always are), incredibly intelligent and driven, confident and self-assured, kind and caring, not afraid to show her emotions, plus she's a demon in the sack. Jake truly is a blessed man. We can only hope to find a women even 1/10th as great as Dani.

Hopefully part 2 keeps this going.

Saved herself? Not taking a cock inside her, okay. But she did everything else. Which makes her a cheater. Loves Daddy? Sucked Not Daddy's cock. Hand jobs. Who knows how many partners. Still cheating.