All Comments on 'A Daughter's Love Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it. I even fought back tears when her mother died. Then her father. And smiled when she found love at the end.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

That was amazing. I have never read anything on this site quite like this. The emotions I felt. DAMN!

HtslHtslover 2 years ago

The story itself is well written and absolutely great until page 3. But in my opinion it was totally needless to let Dani die so early. Therefore only 2/5 from me. Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

MaryAnn is one nosy fuvking bitvh!!

For Dani to die....story deserves a 1-star

rbloch66rbloch66almost 2 years ago

The story was well written, but you killed off my favourite character. I am not happy about that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A truly beautiful and heartbreaking story. I have never commented on a story here before, but feel that this author is one of the most talented that I have come across. If it weren't for the taboo aspects, I would think that it was a Nicholas Sparks novel. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I had some minor complaints mostly about the lesbian part but then it no longer mattered.

How could you do that? How could you kill her? And in such a fucked up way. You damn monster! Bring her back. Say it was a dream. Something; anything. That's fucked up. And that letter... it just kept coming. Haven't cried like that in a while.

And then the dad dies later. So much damn heartbreak in this story. What the hell? It almost feels like you changed the way the story was going just to create a lot of sadness and heartbreak. It's bullshit that Dani died giving birth. They should have had a life together. It's not fair! Anyway take your damn 5 stars while I go cry some more. :'(

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Wow!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Author knew he fucked up. Hence, shitshow.

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