All Comments on 'A Day at the Institute'

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tatlockstatlocksover 3 years ago
Commended.

It's good to see science in action pursuing worthwhile goals. I hope this project continues,

Ralphie101Ralphie101over 3 years ago

Loved this story. Five stars. I could feel his need. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This was fun! I enjoyed it and appreciated the safeword

tech4fun99tech4fun99about 3 years ago

I'd love to see this continue. Maybe next time they all go at him together.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise continues.

Too few details of the series of handjobs/edgings.

Need dialog with him and Jenna while he was being edged. What are you thinking about? Details. Follow up questions to make him get more specific.

More in the way of begging from him.

Four stars.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImagination4 months ago

Really good story, nicely told.

There are different ways you could expand on this theme, and I encourage you to explore them all - or at least any that seem interesting to you.

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My writing focuses generally on what I like to read: sensual, consensual, power exchange, with a heavy tilt toward orgasm control/denial. You're unlikely to find significant pain play in my stories, or anything that would suggest non-consensual sex or coercion beyond what the ...