by Paperweight123
It's good to see science in action pursuing worthwhile goals. I hope this project continues,
I'd love to see this continue. Maybe next time they all go at him together.?
Good premise continues.
Too few details of the series of handjobs/edgings.
Need dialog with him and Jenna while he was being edged. What are you thinking about? Details. Follow up questions to make him get more specific.
More in the way of begging from him.
Four stars.
Really good story, nicely told.
There are different ways you could expand on this theme, and I encourage you to explore them all - or at least any that seem interesting to you.