All Comments on 'A Day at the Spa Pt. 01'

by Guimo330

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
Tinkertaylor99Tinkertaylor9912 months ago

Yes - part 2 please!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Yes more please

ShortyMacShortyMac12 months ago

Definitely want part 2 and more, please. There’s a lot of potential with the start of the story…🤤

BlueEyes1969BlueEyes196912 months ago

Promising story line, but you need to edit repeated grammatical errors. Second person writing is also a bit un-nerving. Hope you'll continue to tell the story!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous