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All Comments on 'A Day in & out with Elizabeth Olsen'

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DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

I'm a little confused about her age and marital background. But other than that, this was a great story about a wonderful actress. keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story, but damn you gotta fix up your grammar. Plus correct the "He" and "She", you're getting mixed up all the time

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Incest and Celebrity fanfiction is my major. but I try in other genre too.