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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A couple of verb tense errors do very little to diminish the quality of this essay.

By far, one of the most errotic I have read here. Now I must go back and review the original offering in this string.

eodeoeodeoover 2 years ago

great so far, waiting for more

SuckergurlSuckergurlover 2 years ago

Not interested in the grammar, the story is beautiful, keep it going, definitely 5*

Les9875Les9875over 2 years ago

Great story! Please keep them cumming!!

gorgon2gorgon2about 2 years ago

OH MY GOD HE'S SO HOT AND RESPECTFUL!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is so good. He treats Mia right. Please give us more.

L O ReinsL O Reinsabout 2 years ago

Ya! Part 3 please. I liked the change in Mike when he got dominant and spanked.

L O ReinsL O Reinsabout 2 years ago

Umm i hit send by accident. Anyway, I like how you’re building out Mike’s personality. Ty4S

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