All Comments on 'A Day on the Water with my Baby'

Wow, as always!

Alyssa is a most intriguing character and this crisp, fun short piece so well written — simply begs for more between the lovers you’ve created. As a near hopeless romantic, hope you flog the pun and rock the boat. Thoroughly enjoy your vivid imagination.

Thanks for sharing yet another arousing true story....

I know how to sail Kristi....just sayin'...😉

Wonderfully naughty xxxxx

It’s been said that the mind is the most important sexual organ. No matter how else our bodies might be blessed by nature and genetics, without the mind engaged sex is just another bodily function at best.

It would seem, by your illustrations in your story, that your girlfriend is fully aware of the mind’s importance in sexual interplay. I gather, too, that you understand this as well as your writing conveys and colors the experience nicely for your readers. I’ve never been aboard a sailboat, certainly not at sea, but I have enjoyed experiences aboard small vessels on inland lakes and rivers. Your story brought back fond memories. Thank you. I’m looking forward to your next story.